I am rewriting the end of this story and I was wondering if this is… I am rewriting the end of this story and I was wondering if this is a good ending for what I have wrote down, starting at the part after Anna is holding Mac’s neck   Anna was looking bashful ” Can you ever forgive me?” Anna said asking Mac, there was no reply. “Mac?” asked Dennis. “Uh oh” said Jeremiah. Mac jumps up and runs toward Dennis, Dennis know that he was one of “them”. When Mac gets close enough Dennis sees a dark purple gash on his neck. “Oh my gosh. I- I didn’t mean to-” says Anna  being cut off by Mac jolting toward Anna. “Ah” yells Anna “Mac” Yells Jeremiah. Dennis, out of habit turns the speaker on very loud. Mac falls to the ground. “M-Mac” says Anna, “Yeah?” Asks Mac fully aware of being a zombie. “You okay son?” Ask Petey Coltrain, “Yeah I think so,” says Mac ” and about the thing earlier about how zombies hate bluegrass. We love it!”  “What?” Asks Petey. “It’s like what you said earlier, um remembering that your human.” explains Mac. Mac and Anna both twitch when the music all of a sudden just stops. Thats all I have for now. What do you think?  Arts & Humanities English